Too Beautiful A Dream...
Oh it’s dawn!
Awaken by a beautiful dream…
Ah! Hope I was never awake!
The sun rays already visible
Through the curtains slightly pulled
Just to keep my eyes slightly open…
Oh! Let me sleep…
Let me see the beautiful dream again
Reality – it was so far away from it!
I closed my eyes again…
Was I wondering to see the same dream
Again? I really don’t know… how I wish or not!
Was it painful? I asked myself…
The answer is still unanswered.
But, the litl’ I could recall was too beautiful
The small house…
The two little kids playing…
The awesome garden and the endless climbers…
Increased the beauty all the more…
The man standing there… was
I saw: My life to be…
It was unbelievable, was…
Was it true?
Is it real?
Oh! I said myself…
Wake up… wake up…
It’s too beautiful: Only to be a dream!
---Chandamita
6 comments:
oh! a wonderful dream...with immaculate feelings....
CHANDA here you comes, with a dream which every girl has...seems that you have painted the image of a happy life which everyone wants...let all of us close our dreams and fall in to same beautiful dream.
all the best
Good one. nicely painted.
spelling mistake: not AWOKEN.. it should be awaken.
use AND instead of just 'n'
that will make it more beautiful..
Hope you have your dreams fulfilled.
Oh Gosh Chuts,,,,,If u ever stop staring at kids. then this dream will be true...::PP anyways itys beautifully carved...kepp writing and dreaming and making them reality ....
The spirited horse, which will try to win the race of its own accord, will run even faster if encouraged...
All the best...
P
Nice. dont know if u have read "I love all beauteous things" by Robert Bridges .. all the best.
Do you write all of your dreams this way? Oh man I will prefer sleep and see more nice dreams!!
BTW was the man standing too tall?
Just a question you C?
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